Well done!. It is always tricky to try and convey your message and keep the rhythm and rhyme going. I think you were successful here. I often wonder whether we should explain a word we’re not sure our reader may understand. I choose not to and let them chase it up if they really care. Your option makes it easier though.

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  1. Satisfactory peer review Nigel but your suggestions for improvement could be a little more direct. I feel you would really be able to offer others in the group a good insight into what works and what does not.
    Overall outstanding work in your blog so far!

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